Raise the IELTS writing score five tips

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New Oriental …

  author: Chen Zhi]..

IELTS writing marking criteria include four main areas: …

task achievement (。.

Task completion …

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、。.

coherence and cohesion (。.

Cohesion and coherence in..

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、。.

lexical resource (。.

Vocabulary resources.

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、。.

grammatical。.

range and accuracy (。.

Grammatical range and accuracy …

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Essay structure is irrational if candidates write, Word vegetation lacked variety of sentence structure, grammatical errors, you cannot get a high score. So how can the candidates need to do to get the high score in IELTS writing it? I made this article five raise the IELTS writing proposals, and I hope to help candidates …

Recommended: the Chase, the ending finale …

Candidates can imagine, if you were an examiner, you want in the shortest period of time to know the gist of the text, where would you read it? The answer must be the beginning and end of a paragraph. Therefore, candidates writing in the beginning point, and then at the end of a finale, judge of marking so that candidates have the potential to make a good impression …

Duan Shou Chase refers to in the first sentence of each paragraph to write topic sentences of the paragraph. When I wrote the topic sentences, succinctly put forward their arguments, but it must be substantive. We contrast the following two paragraphs, each selected from the sword …

5.

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Test 1。.

Writing Task 2。.

4.

Composition with the sword …

4.

》。.

Test 3。.

Writing Task 2。.

7.

Composition …

Example …

1: 。.

①。.

Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin。.

with …。.

②。.

Creative artists play a major role。.

in our society。.

Comment: …

By contrast, candidates can be found, ① wrote a dozen words, but no substance; s only nine words, was able to convey the writer’s view that “creative artists has an important position in society”. It can be seen that candidate when he wrote the first sentence, not the pursuit of complex sentences, and to take up enough of the principle. ② pattern …

play a major/vital/significant role in。.

It is suitable for use in the first sentence …

End cap refers to the candidates at the end of a paragraph to write a content-rich, complex sentences, which is more likely to reflect the candidates ‘ level, attract the attention of the examiner. Please look at the sword …

4.

》。.

Test 3。.

Writing Task 2。.

7.

Sentence at the end of the second paragraph of composition …

Example …

2: 。.

There is almost everything good in。.

what is given to us through the media world which is made up of artists。.

Comment: …

The main structure of this sentence is.

there be。.

Sentence patterns, o structure which in turn contains the sentence there.

what。.

Guide agreed, and the object clause was applied …

which。.

Guided attributive clauses, sentences like this deserves to be “featured guest”. Candidates if the infrastructure is better, you can use more complex sentence in the essay, but if the candidates have no less confident about my ability to write a complex sentence, so conspicuous in the comparison at the end of paragraph writing, no need to use in the whole composition …

Can be used to end a finale to collect a lot, I recommend a very useful to candidates it can structure complex sentence patterns–non-restrictive attributive clause. Non-restrictive attributive clauses to supplement the role of the main clause, which is separated by commas between main clauses. Most easily learned sentence patterns in non-restrictive attributive clause as follows: “…

…, which means that …。.

“Candidates need only two ellipses respectively add a simple sentence, also notice clause in the sentence is a comma preceding sentence should be no logical explanation of the relationship …

Recommendation II: …

Varied sentence structure, write three clauses …

The diversity of sentence structure has always been a favorite of the examiner, because in the eyes of the examiner, abundance of the sentence structure of the composition of candidates can directly reflect the degree of English proficiency for candidates. Here the sword …

4.

》。.

Test 3。.

Writing Task 2。.

7.

Second paragraph of the essay …

Example …

3: 。.

Creative artists play a major role in。.

our society, be it the government, old people, the youth or the children。. Their。.

works enlighten our minds, no matter if is factual or entertainment based。. It。.

is diserving that after a day’s work when we want to take some time off for。.

ourselves, we look out for some leisure。. For instance: either pleasant music or。.

a family movie which soothes the mind。. Entertainment give us an overview of a。.

new side of life which every individual respects。. There is almost everything。.

good in what is given to us through the media world which is made up of。.

artists。.

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: This passage a few grammatical errors, but this about …

100.

Passage of the word, there has been a simple word, Jim. “.

it is + adj。. + that。.

”、由。.

when。.

Boot time clauses, by …

which。.

Guide the attributive, …

what。.

Guide agreed, and..

there be。.

Seven or eight kinds of totally different sentence patterns. Sentence structures and varied, and met the necessary conditions of IELTS high score compositions …

IELTS examiners had pointed out, complex sentence patterns should account for the whole composition …

30%. the.

Or so. IELTS …

5.5 …

Score is sure to contain a variety of complex sentences in writing. Many types of complex sentences, you even remember all kinds of writings are unlikely to fully use. Therefore, the test taker can pick out the key, to simplify, mastering the most common complex sentence patterns, applied to the writing. Based on research and observations, three of the most common writing complex sentences, that is, as we usually say “troika” means is attributive clause, adverbial and object clause …

1.

Attributive …

Attributive clause is used most often in IELTS writing complex sentences more complex sentences. Writing for attributive, candidates need to learn to use a variety of the amount of energy, not only to learn how to use …

which。.

And …

that。.

Common guiding Word, to learn how to use guide words. To sum up, the most common attributive guide includes the following eight: people …

who。.

、。.

whom。.

And …

whose。.

, Says …

which。.

Either token can represent a person’s …

that。.

Representing …

where。.

, Represents the time of …

when。.

As well as causal …

why。.

Here, the author mainly to introduce candidates as a handy and useful expression of reason …

why。.

Led indicator …

As we all know, writing many of the topics that need to be asked in an analysis of the cause of the event. Candidates most likely to …

because。.

Boot where clauses to express, in fact, candidates can also use …

why。.

Boot attributive to explain why at this time …

why。.

Antecedent must be in front of …

the reason。.

We can be summarized in the following sentence: …

On。.

e of the (most) significant reasons why +。.

Describing the phenomena of sentence …

+ is +。.

Summarized reasons for noun phrases …

We look at one example …

Example …

4: …

On。.

e of the most significant reasons。.

why 。.

wild animals are facing the。.

possibility of extinction。.

is 。.

the。.

increased influence of human activities。.

.

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: In this sentence, …

why。.

Later in the sentence …

wild animals are facing the。.

possibility of extinction。.

Is the description of the topic, and …

the increased influence of human activities。.

Is inductive causes of noun phrases. This pattern can be used in both paragraphs, can also be used in the Central meaning of the first paragraph identifies paragraph …

2.

Adverb …

Lying on a wide range, five of the most commonly used classes in IELTS writing: when the box office opens, causes an adverbial clause, conditions an adverbial clause, adverbial clause of purpose and the characters portrayed. Above several candidates to master an adverbial clause, so to achieve the diversity of sentence structure in composition which is very simple. In fact, wrote an adverbial clause is not difficult, as long as the summary of the candidate and remember lying on the amount of energy can be easily broken, while according to the master-slave relationship on the correct use of the amount of energy. Here are a few adverbial for candidate consideration …

Example …

5: 。.

①。.

The related sectors。.

should take effective measures 。.

the。.

moment。.

the problem appeared。.

②。.

As。.

education is particularly significant。.

for the growth of the children, every parent in China is making efforts to。.

acquire the highest teaching quality for kids。.

③。.

Providing that。.

social violence is。.

eliminated completely, every citizen can be able to live in peace and harmony。.

Comment: …

① is by …

the moment。.

Boot time clauses, ② is …

as。.

Adverbial clause of cause of boot, ③ consists …

providing that (。.

The equivalent of …

if)。.

Guide the adverbial clause of condition. These three sentences by connecting the two simple words the amount of energy to be a complex sentence, sentence structure is more diverse, the logical structure of the sentence is also very clear, added a lot of bright spots for writing …

3.

Object clause …

Compared to the previous two types of clauses, of object clause in writing the use of frequency is relatively small. In fact, the object clause can be used to write or total raised in their sentences. In this sentence, for example …

Example …

6: 。.

A growing number of parents believe。.

that being overly dependent on social networking websites on。.

ly makes their。.

children more isolated in the real world。.

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: This sentence is elaborated through the object clause the author’s opinion, the “over-reliance on social networking will only make their children more alone in the real world”.

Recommendation: avoid pointless duplication …

Many Chinese students to come up with words, IELTS writing will seem very well written but is entirely duplicate content. For example, “…

Personally speaking, I think …。.

“Such a sentence. This sentence there is no problem on the surface, but in reality, …

personally speaking。.

And …

I think。.

Belonging to the significance of duplicate content, simply leave one up. Here the sword …

5.

》。.

Test 1。.

Writing Task 2。.

4.

The first sentence of the second paragraph of composition …

Example …

7: 。.

Firstly, I will discuss about two。.

reasons of argument for to begin with …。.

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: The end of this sentence …

to begin with。.

And the beginning of the …

firstly。.

Means exactly the same. This stuffing words in writing not only useless, but also writing scores, candidates must be avoided in writing …

Candidates at the time of writing is also vulnerable to a repeat is to reuse the same terminology. For example, the “important” this word appears in almost every article, and usually occurs more than once in a composition, many candidates are in your writing …

imp。.

ortant。.

Express, written this way easy for examiners find boring. In my daily study, candidates can get some related vocabulary, used when writing can be interchanged, made the vocabulary of composition more diversified. Sometimes, with a high point of proximity, Word replaces the simple words can often be “the miraculous” to elevate the sentence highlights. Please compare the following two sentences …

Example …

8: 。.

①。.

Teachers are very imp。.

ortant in children’s growth。.

②。.

The position of teachers is。.

irreplaceable in the growth of the children。.

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: Candidates can be seen, ① is too general, no highlights. How should it be modified to make the examiner’s eyes light up? Candidates can find a way to transform into a complex sentence, or you can use advanced synonyms to help you. ① ② is the sentence reworked ② adjectives with high …

irreplaceable (。.

Irreplaceable …

)。.

To replace the training …

imp。.

ortant。.

, Sentence suddenly become good …

Example …

9: 。.

①。.

The graph shows that more and more people began to spend more money。.

on clothing。.

②。.

The graph clearly shows that a。.

growing number of people began to invest more money in clothing。.

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: ① there are three …

more。.

And ②..

a growing number of people。.

In a sentence to be replaced …

more and more。.

But also …

invest。.

① basic vocabulary in the intermediate term instead of the sentence …

spend。.

And this sentence highlights appeared …

Recommendation four: vocabulary matching needs to be properly …

Lexical collocation which is easily ignored by candidates, in fact, lose sight of this is that many candidates are unable to break through …

5.

One of the important reasons. We look at the sword …

5.

》。.

Test 1。.

Writing Task 2。.

4.

Two sentences in his composition …

Example …

8: 。.

①。.

… because it will be balance of idea while studying。.

②。.

New ideas from different vision。.

will happen。.

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: These two sentences are wrapped in grammatically correct appearance of typical wrong sentences: two of the syntactic structure of the sentence is correct, but is unable to read. Why? Because the collocation is not correct here. Consider carefully:.

balance 。.

And …

idea。.

How could you mix together? …

Moreover,.

new ideas。.

How can …

happen。.

Then? Opinions should be “presented” or “being developed”. Composition there are many shortcuts would like to get a high score, accuracy is to keep the essay score in lexical collocation can be a great magic weapon for the breakthrough …

Recommendation five: try to avoid syntax errors.

Chinese students often make mistakes in grammar in writing, candidates are careful, many syntax errors can be avoided. Following enumerated categories of candidates make syntax errors.

First, candidates writing pitfalls-verb inconsistency error, especially when the subject is third person singular, third person singular of the verb is not used. To avoid this type of syntax error there is no skill, candidates only to finish a sentence and then immediately turn back to check make sure whether you’re making this kind of error. If candidates in the third person plural of the verb there two or three times in error, it is possible to lose …

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Second, when the number of candidates writing using a Word, don’t pay attention to distinguish if a correct plural forms used. This question may seem simple, but it is the part of the candidates-prone places. With the sentence “.

In the modern society, computer is applied in a wide range of。.

aspects。.

“For examples. In this sentence, …

computer。.

Is a countable noun refers. Countable noun distinction is used when using a singular noun is a plural noun, is a singular noun, prior to a singular noun plus articles …

a/an。.

Or …

the。.

This can be explained using several of the singular form of the word …

computer。.

, But is not preceded by the word, thus committing a syntax error, should be replaced …

the computer。.

, The correct sentence is: “..

The computer is applied in。.

a wide range of aspects。.

“Or …

computer。.

Changed to the plural, correct sentence to read: “…

Computers are applied in a wide range of aspects。.

”。.

Third, candidates writing the simple phenomenon of double predicate, it is write a taboo. With the sentence “.

There。.

are a tremendous number of students go abroad every year。.

“For example, this sentence appears …

are。.

And …

go。.

Two finite verbs, between two finite verbs have no logical conjunctions such as and, and thus the sentence made the error of double predicate. For example, candidates can be in a sentence …

go。.

Changed to non-finite verb …

going。.

.

Four candidates writing simple sentences in a lot of way, the frequency of error is high. With the sentence “.

Protecting。.

the environment playing a vital role in our daily activities。.

“For example, where the …

playing。.

Is the present participle of the verb, you cannot directly act as predicate should be …

playing。.

Precede …

be。.

The verb …

is。.

Or …

playing。.

The words …

plays。.

.

Five candidates at the time of writing is more prone to errors of tense confusion. For example, Chinese students in writing easy when you can’t tell in the past tense and the present perfect tense. Simple past tense to describe is a thing of the past, stress from the past and present perfect continues until what happens now or had an impact on now …

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  (this selected works are since the new Oriental English magazine of January 2014) …

Raise the IELTS writing score five tips

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